Razia got a 7.0 band in IELTS Writing

 Razia got a 7.0 band 

Dear Ms. Rose,

I am writing to thank you for the lost blue Gucci handbag you couriered to my house address on the 15th of March.



Fortunately, it was your cafĂ© near the airport where I forgot my bag. Actually, I had decided to relax with a cup of coffee a few minutes before my plane took off. Had I realized my mistake even a few minutes before boarding, I would have surely come back for it. I cannot begin to express how delighted I was to have received it within one week of losing it.

Needless to say, this bag holds great sentimental value for me because it is a gift from my late grandmother on my 20th birthday. Even though she is no longer with me, this present makes me feel otherwise. That is why it is very precious to me. Now I hope you must have understood why it is the most valuable thing I own. Had I not found it, it would have been the greatest loss of my life.



Please allow me to express how grateful I am by accepting this wristwatch as a token of my appreciation.

kind regards

Razia





Reasons for getting a band score of 7.0:

  • She used complex grammar structures very flexibly and the collocations have no mistakes. 
  • She used less common words.
  • She used the right format of a letter and wrote more than 150 words.
  • Her purpose statement is clear in the introductory paragraph.
  • She presented and extended the idea with relevant information and supported them well.
  • She has generated a well-developed response 
  • There are minor grammar errors, but they do not impede the overall idea
  • No punctuation mistakes.
  • The majority of sentences are error-free 
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