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Band score: 7.0
Sadia 


Some people believe that teenage is the best part of life where there is the freedom to enjoy rather than worrying about different responsibilities. Conversely, others think that adults are happier than teenagers even though they have greater responsibilities. In this essay, I am going to express my views on both points.

Considering the level of freedom we have in our teenage years, I think no doubt these years are the happiest ones where we could enjoy our life without bothering with different responsibilities. However, in this age, we are financially dependent on elders and to some extent bound in making our own decisions too. If I take my example, in my teenage I was not allowed to go to parties without my parents since they were concerned about my safety and they believed that I was not mature enough to take care of myself.
Considering the fact of being dependent on our elders in our teenage, I believe adult age is more mature and therefore we have more freedom to enjoy ourselves. Even though adults have more responsibilities, they are usually financially independent and have fewer restrictions. Even if they have families and kids, they feel happier with these relations. As an adult, I have a feeling of being mature and I don’t really rely on any elders from my family. In fact, I can travel alone and go to gatherings far away from my residence.

To conclude, in my opinion, albeit adults have greater responsibilities than teenagers, still they are happier and more independent.





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