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It is a common opinion of society that individuals should get married before the age of 30 so as to avail personal and social comforts. Although this is a subject of debate, I disagree with it. This essay will direct the reasons for my opinion and will shed light on the common example from society.

Undoubtedly, marriage brings fortune and prosperity to one’s life. However, it must be noted that this significant decision in life should not be impacted by the social norm of marrying before a certain age. While the factors impacting the decision of initiating marital life are manifold, a chief notion is that these factors apply in a different manner to each individual.

In the growing professional competition in today’s world, it is becoming exceedingly important for people to excel in their careers so that they are able to have a lifetime of luxurious livelihood. This compels young graduates to pursue higher education in many specialties, for instance, healthcare post-graduation program demand years of one’s life during which the person has to put in all of his or her career efforts to academics. After the completion of this higher education, efforts may seemingly take shape of fruitful outcomes in the form of better work opportunities. Although it is an argument riddled with various opinions, in most cases, marriage and education may not go hand in hand, and in the quest for one, the other may be compromised. The early twenties is the age when most individuals get enrolled in higher education or training programs and marriage during this period may be a source of distraction for the aspirant. Lack of adequate focus due to marital life may compromise the academic side of a person.

Furthermore, another influencing factor that has a profound impact on the decision of the appropriate age for marriage is the development of an individual’s conscience and maturity. This usually reaches its peak at the age of 35 years. Getting involved in marital relationships too early may not allow an individual to cope with marital issues such as an understanding spouse or family planning. Lady Diana’s marriage is an extreme illustration of this point and while the royal wedding had been considered a fairy tale of its time, the marriage was a bitter failure, one of the chief reasons for this failure was the lack of understanding between the royal couple and lady Diana’s young age significantly impacted this lack of understanding with her spouse.

In conclusion, there may be multiple social implications of getting married at different ages, nevertheless, I am not inclined towards the idea of getting into marital relations before the wired age of 30 years. While one may have to compromise multiple bounties if he or she plans to marry late.

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